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Preaching to the Deserted

Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2017 7:06 am
by Dewke
A new trap beat song. A lot going on in this track. Feedback welcome :)
Listen to Preaching to the Deserted by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/prea ... e-deserted

Re: Preaching to the Deserted

Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2017 1:50 am
by brandystarbrite
It sounds good and you're on to something cool here.
But for some strange reason, it seems to be missing a special something, that'll make it sound better.

Feel free to improve this track and re-post it, whenever you have time, so we could listen to it. :)

Re: Preaching to the Deserted

Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2017 2:37 am
by D.Ipsum
Nice one.

I find that the reverb is too pronounced in this track (I've listened with headphones, so ...).
Maybe via automation, it is possible to play with it.

For the snares, I think it would be nice to have clones of each snare, and to greatly decrease the reverb of the snares cloned. Then, you could sometimes replace a reverberated snare shot by a no/less reverberated snare shot.

Anyway, nice one.

Re: Preaching to the Deserted

Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2017 2:25 pm
by Dewke
Thanks for the feedback. :) Will definitely add more. I agree with it missing something. Maybe some changes in the chords which are a bit monotone to add more of a tune. ;)