Kugel - My second LMMS song! (Progressive house, kinda)

[SkyEyeMCCIX]

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0By7tV ... TFRcGJTN1E - .mmp file
https://youtu.be/ogX6UMxJcIE - YouTube video

I finally came around completing a second track out of one of my melodies. What do you guys think? I tried to capture an EDM-progressive house style, with deadmau5 as my inspiration. It's in Gb minor, and unfortunately that squeezed a tritone into the synths (I hate how tritones sound). I also took some hints from old-style dubstep and merged it in with the background bass.

Any constructive feedback, positive and/or negative, is welcomed.

[brandystarbrite]

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0By7tV ... TFRcGJTN1E - .mmp file
https://youtu.be/ogX6UMxJcIE - YouTube video

I finally came around completing a second track out of one of my melodies. What do you guys think? I tried to capture an EDM-progressive house style, with deadmau5 as my inspiration. It's in Gb minor, and unfortunately that squeezed a tritone into the synths (I hate how tritones sound). I also took some hints from old-style dubstep and merged it in with the background bass.

Any constructive feedback, positive and/or negative, is welcomed.

What you have so far, doesn't sound bad at all.
It's quite pleasant and you did some nice work there.

But it still has a bit to go, and alot of stuff to add into it, in order for it sound like an
EDM progressive house style track.
Practice, practice, practice. Learn new stuff.

Check this Move for me remake, from coffebean, for some inspiration.
https://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1349