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[EDM, Prog. House] My third song, Eticit! Need feedback

Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2017 9:30 pm
by SkyEyeMCCIX
https://youtu.be/m3iMeNsWghY

This is my third song release. It's also my first time using other plugins such as BitInvader, rather than solely TripleOsc.

Also new is some basic 'album art' I created, if it may be called so, rather than video game screenshots to fill the time.
I'd like to arrange these first songs of mine into a 'album' titled 'A Humble Beginning'. I'm not too knowledgeable with music terms, is there any sort of process or such needed to create a so-called 'album'? Or is a 'album' just a generic term for a group of songs?

I'd also like some feedback on the music itself, positive or negative, as long as it's constructive.

Re: [EDM, Prog. House] My third song, Eticit! Need feedback

Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2017 5:23 am
by D.Ipsum
For someone who starts in computer music, who has not studied music, and who has not practiced a musical instrument, I find that this third track is very good. Everything is there, in its place. It is very different from the first two you presented on the forum.

Re: [EDM, Prog. House] My third song, Eticit! Need feedback

Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2017 4:11 pm
by brandystarbrite
This tune definitely shows, that you're getting better at making music.

To answer your question on albums: Yes, an album is a group of songs/tracks.

Re: [EDM, Prog. House] My third song, Eticit! Need feedback

Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2017 6:43 pm
by Mo Stitchi
Yop,

Something is a bit disturbing for me: you have a sound playing as a rythmic, and starting at 1:00, you use the same sound (or a sound very similar) to play something more like a solo or a melody. Even if you pan them, I think both sounds should be more different (height of the notes, or timber, or envelope).

Sorry if my sentences are not that clear, English is not my mother tongue....

Re: [EDM, Prog. House] My third song, Eticit! Need feedback

Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2017 6:59 pm
by J.J, Fliss
the beginning is kinda boring, but it does get better. As for the song itself? well... its ok, maybe a little repetitive. and also it seems to have sour notes in it. But I commend you for trying to make something original cause, hey! It seems pretty original to me.