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New house wip, feedback pls
Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 1:49 pm
by |DIVIDE
I'm trying to make this a really well-made track, I've put a lot of effort into it already and would love some feedback to make it even better!
https://clyp.it/lftx4rko
Re: New house wip, feedback pls
Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 2:19 pm
by Gps
I think the main theme needs a bit more variation.
Re: New house wip, feedback pls
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 1:27 am
by D.Ipsum
i agree with Gps.
The kick that appears at 02m16s lacks impact (like the relaxed skin of a drum).
I guess it's a dance-oriented track, so I find that the kick-driven parts are too short.
Re: New house wip, feedback pls
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 1:38 am
by insonico
I feel like the intro sounds a couple of bars too repetitive. So, yeah, some variation would be nice.
Otherwise, nice work.
Re: New house wip, feedback pls
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 1:55 pm
by Mo Stitchi
Yop,
A bit more variations indeed, but nice tune. I like the end, no fade-out...