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Hello, so Im stuck with this attempt of instrumental rap and I don't know what should I do, I have some things in mind, for example add a bass melody or another counter melody but I don't know what instrument use, another thing is, the intro it seems a bit weak, also should extend the "melody" of the piano?. Need some help from more experienced people than me.
(I usually don't comment in other music projects because I don't have the knowledge)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3GiwjN-TVCk

Pretty similar to your track called Next One.

The line of drums is good (there are clicks at the end of the samples).

I do not see how to improve the track, although it is a bit short.

D.Ipsum wrote: ↑

Thu Dec 14, 2017 9:29 am

Pretty similar to your track called Next One.

The line of drums is good (there are clicks at the end of the samples).

I do not see how to improve the track, although it is a bit short.

Yes is similar that is why I named it Clone, hehe. And it is short because it is not finished. Ok I wrote down the clicks.

After 2 days scratching my head with this song and going mad, I decided to end it once and for all and move on to the next song. I did what I can. I believe there are no clicks now. Anyway here it is.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijIG2yiykaQ&t

s3mp1t3rno wrote: ↑

Thu Dec 14, 2017 12:01 pm

After 2 days scratching my head with this song and going mad, I decided to end it once and for all and move on to the next song. I did what I can. I believe there are no clicks now. Anyway here it is.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijIG2yiykaQ&t

It's much better and more clean.

s3mp1t3rno wrote: ↑

Thu Dec 14, 2017 12:01 pm

After 2 days scratching my head with this song and going mad, I decided to end it once and for all and move on to the next song. I did what I can. I believe there are no clicks now. Anyway here it is.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijIG2yiykaQ&t

It sounds nice so far.
And I like that kick drum beat. It really carries along the entire tune.

Okay: Things I noticed.
The entire tune, definitely needs a volume raise.
Or is it Youtube, causing that problem?

And the kick drum beat, needs to be a tiny tiny bit louder.

I tried to listen to the first link. But I noticed that the vid is gone. Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!