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Back again with the hits

Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2017 5:12 am
by samthekid108
I'm trying to get in a rhythm of being able to pump out a decent hip hop/trap beat without getting hung up on mistakes or polish.
https://soundcloud.com/samthekid108/oriental-trop

now is a good time to hear any noticeable mistakes or ways to polish

Re: Back again with the hits

Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2017 3:14 am
by brandystarbrite
Quite a cool beat, you made here.
And the bass, used in it, is rippin'. 8-)

The summary under the track, made me laugh. Lol! :mrgreen:

Re: Back again with the hits

Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2017 10:37 pm
by D.Ipsum
Nice demo, but the blade of this katana seems rather fragile.

There is still a lot of space to invest. The string instrument seems a little lonely. You can play with the stereo, or play with reverb, or delay (eg the delayorama), etc. Or, you can also add other instruments, such as a discreet pad, etc. Or ...

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Re: Back again with the hits

Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2017 10:49 pm
by samthekid108
D.Ipsum wrote:
Sat Dec 30, 2017 10:37 pm
Nice demo, but the blade of this katana seems rather fragile.

There is still a lot of space to invest. The rope instrument seems a little lonely. You can play with the stereo, or play with reverb, or delay (eg the delayorama), etc. Or, you can also add other instruments, such as a discreet pad, etc. Or ...
good to hear. for the finished version, i planned on changing the melody on the second half of the song so it can better ,mesh with the sample
I mostly didn't add new instruments cause it was way too late and i didn't feel like searching through my computer