So I tried making a hardbass track...

[SkyEyeMCCIX]

https://soundcloud.com/skyeye-mccix/cyka-blyat

https://youtu.be/ciwcP_yVQyY

And for those of you who don't know, Hardbass is a Russian meme genre that centres around Russian slang and pipe sounds, although ironically enough doesn't quite have a hard bassline. Perhaps the most infamous hardbass composition is 'Cheeki Breeki Hardbass Anthem', posted to YouTube by apartje.

How would you rate the track? What would you change with it?

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/skyeye-mccix/cyka-blyat

Funny one, I didn't know that meme.

[brandystarbrite]

The first thing I noticed, is that this music track, has a cool sound to it.

The thing I picked up on, that I think needs improving, is that:
The air rush fade out sound, heard from 0:56 to 1:00 secs, should have lasted
a bit longer, before fading out.

Overall, I don't know much about this genre of music, but I will admit, it is quite interesting.

[Smoking Shadows]

Interesting track here. At the beginning, imo the kicks should probably have a bit more punch to trance the audience a bit. But what do I know? I'm just a sucker for hard hitting kicks in this fashion lol

I haven't listened to much hard bass, but hopefully this somewhat helps you friend