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your thoughts?

Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2018 5:05 pm
by illu

Re: your thoughts?

Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2018 11:11 pm
by samthekid108
oh hey,
I really liked part two out them all, the melodies and awkward drum pattern make it a melodramatic version of lo-fi.
which is one of my favorite genres.

Re: your thoughts?

Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2018 3:20 am
by brandystarbrite
Tip:

Das Erwachen Der Maschinen Full: From 0 secs to 3:58 secs, needs a nice volume raise. :)
But, the sound effects and metronome type sound, need a slight volume reduction because
they sound sharp, stand out alot and kinda overpower, the other instruments playing in the entire track.

In this version:
Das Erwachen Der Maschinen Cut Part2: This one also needs, a slight volume raise too.
And again, the sound effects, need a slight volume reduction, because they stand out alot.
The piano, has nice volume loudness, from time to time.
But at certain parts in the track, the volume of the piano, seem to decrease.

Overall, I will admit, you did good work, composing these two tracks and they both sound nice.
The music, has an unusual, haunting vibe, yet a relaxing tone to it too.
A very interesting combination. :)

Re: your thoughts?

Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 1:58 am
by D.Ipsum
From the intro, the name of Einstürzende Neubauten appeared to me. Yet, it's another universe ... It may be the industrial moments ... Idk ... Anyway, nice diptic, the two parties follow each other well. Definitely, I appreciate this trip.