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Hey Guys! I'm new here, but this is my first track! Tell me what y'all think
https://soundcloud.com/user-33606224/angels-die

This sounds really good

JamesCline wrote: ↑

Fri Feb 02, 2018 6:27 am

Hey Guys! I'm new here, but this is my first track! Tell me what y'all think
https://soundcloud.com/user-33606224/angels-die

You're welcome!

Wow, it is a little hard for me to listen to tracks for lovers (I feel pink, like a delicate flower ), but clearly, you send well, good voice (a little hard to climb into the treble).

JamesCline wrote: ↑

Fri Feb 02, 2018 6:27 am

Hey Guys! I'm new here, but this is my first track! Tell me what y'all think
https://soundcloud.com/user-33606224/angels-die

Not a fan of the explicits, but...........
Quite a good track ya made here.

From 12 to 35 secs, and in a few other parts of this track, your vocal sample sounds a bit dry.
I think all your vocal sample needs, is a hint of echo effect, or a reverb effect on it.
A slight hint of those effects, might make it sound very cool. (wet and dry dials of calf reverb)

You sing really nice. I rate your singing 88 out of 100.
But a tiny bit more practice is needed. Especially on the higher vocal notes.
You're only 12% off from 100%. So keep practicing, a bit more.

But overall, good work so far.