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NEED FEEDBACK ON THIS ONE!

Posted: February 23rd, 2018, 5:38 am
by Jbarn
PLEASE LEAVE A LIKE IF YOU ENJOYED & A COMMENT OR FEEDBACK ON SOUNDCLOUD IS VERY APPRECIATED.

I made ANOTHA one.

This time I was the producer and artist which doesn't happen extremely often.

Short story:
Literally just moved into my new apartment and was in the process of setting up my music setup.
Long story short I literally opened this old ass beat from like a year ago and just starting freestyling.
knew I had to write some quick lyrics.
Let me know what you think.

https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/season-j-kidd-prod-jbarn

PLEASE LEAVE A LIKE IF YOU ENJOYED & A COMMENT OR FEEDBACK ON SOUNDCLOUD IS VERY APPRECIATED.

Re: NEED FEEDBACK ON THIS ONE!

Posted: February 24th, 2018, 1:44 am
by brandystarbrite
For an old beat, it's soundin' dope.

Tip: I think the volume on the vocals, should be a tiny, tiny bit louder.

Re: NEED FEEDBACK ON THIS ONE!

Posted: February 25th, 2018, 10:03 pm
by D.Ipsum
Nice beat. Good work on voice layers, applied effects. On that point, maybe it's your best track.

Re: NEED FEEDBACK ON THIS ONE!

Posted: March 2nd, 2018, 12:37 am
by Smoking Shadows
Like the vibes from the beat, and good layering on the voices, sounded smooth. But imo, the vocal should be just a little bit louder... just a bit

Re: NEED FEEDBACK ON THIS ONE!

Posted: March 16th, 2018, 1:13 am
by Jbarn
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑
February 24th, 2018, 1:44 am
For an old beat, it's soundin' dope.

Tip: I think the volume on the vocals, should be a tiny, tiny bit louder.
Oh for real on the vocals. I could see that.

Thanks for the continuous feedback! Helps a lot