Where I Hide My Heart - Day 2 demo

[woods alive]

Posted an early version of this here a day or two ago. It's not fully done, but I'd like whatever input I can get on it.

https://clyp.it/lw1dxxkq

EDIT: forgot the soundcloud link for those who like SC better.

https://soundcloud.com/davisjacobym/whe ... early-demo

[brandystarbrite]

Always a lovely track from you.

The pad that ends at 33 secs, seemed to cut off a bit too abruptly.
Make it last a tiny bit longer, and fade out the volume slowly.

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/davisjacobym/whe ... early-demo

This new version is better, in the end, I wait for the continuation.