4 genres, one song -- Constructive critiques needed

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https://clyp.it/x3diubt2
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Before I publish this to anywhere else, I need some constructive critiques of this song for improvement :)

Here's the previous version:

-WIP- Happy Hardcore, DnB, Chiptune, and Noise
https://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=27326

Just a back story:
this song is a combination of at least 5 unfinished project files that would never reach mastering stage nor completion, which includes a test on using an FM VSTi (the noise growls), deleted chiptune song that had only few loops recovered (intro), the joke happy-sounding trance song that became a hands-up then hardcore (drop), another old chiptune song that used to accompany the premade loops in Magix Music Maker Jam, and some rhythms from an another abandoned chiptune song that I made few days before I started ambient. The ones I didn't include are the songs which are on minor keys.

Truly, the power of crappy and incomplete songs. This might be affecting the main song and it might be either... so bad that it just became good. OR vise versa. idk.
vortexsupernova wrote:
Thu May 17, 2018 1:37 pm
https://clyp.it/x3diubt2
Verry fun, verry happy! Very good idea to mix different unfinished projects.
D.Ipsum wrote:
Fri May 18, 2018 12:40 am
Verry fun, verry happy! Very good idea to mix different unfinished projects.
eeeeee, i thought its gonna be wrecked, but it gud. Thanks for the feedback :)
Whats wrong with it? :)
brandystarbrite wrote:
Sun May 20, 2018 3:18 am
Whats wrong with it? :)
eeee it .really. good? :o :D Is there something you did like, or did not like? Something else to improve?

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