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Hi Everybody,

here my new track,

https://soundcloud.com/davide-naldi-941 ... he-rainbow

it's a pleasure to receive any comments or suggestions,

have a nice weekend!

Davide

Yop!

Nice intro (maybe a little too much of the "sliding" noise), I like the way the instruments are entering the game until 1:30 where the beat becomes soooo groovy. But from 2:00, it is unfortunately a bit submerged by the melody. Nice end.

Aye. This is good.
You're on to something good here.

Okay, the noise air rush sweep sound, ends too abruptly.
Tip: Let it last a little bit longer, then make it fade out gradually.
Or, when it starts to fade out, make it echo, as it nears closer to the end
of it's cycle, then fade it out.

Another thing, make some variations, with the noise air rush sweep sound.
Doing that, will make it sound special, every time it plays in the track.

If you want, check out Lmms' calf reverb plugin.
It might make the air rush sweep sound, sound cooler and a bit more fuller too.

As for the beats and melody, I like what I hear so far.

Thanks Mo Stitchi and very nice to have comments of Brandystarbrite:
In The noise sweep I make the Echo with the Delay inside Synth1, but maybe is too lower if You didn't hear it. I start using Lmms 3 months ago, and I put my time on Synth 1 that for me is One of the most versatile free VST plugin: Every sound exept the best is from Synth 1.
Yes Brandystarbrite, Almost in Every sound I used CalfReverb to make It sounds bigger, and I'll try ti make different noise sweep.
Thanks again and have a nice Sunday!

Sorry, i would like ti write "Every sounds except the beat", not the "best"

dave30814 wrote: ↑

Fri May 18, 2018 6:14 pm

https://soundcloud.com/davide-naldi-941 ... he-rainbow

Hi, nice rainbow, beautifull sky, with reminiscences of the late 80s, early 90s.