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My first good one

Posted: Sat May 26, 2018 6:54 am
by maga

Re: My first good one

Posted: Sat May 26, 2018 7:41 am
by Mo Stitchi
Yop,

Nice mood in this track! You should perhaps add some variations in the keyboard riff, by transposing it for example.

Re: My first good one

Posted: Sat May 26, 2018 7:04 pm
by D.Ipsum
maga wrote:
Sat May 26, 2018 6:54 am
hope u enjoy it :D
https://soundcloud.com/user-270251718/rainy-day
Nice, calm, discreet.
But indeed, the scene is frozen.

Re: My first good one

Posted: Sun May 27, 2018 12:27 am
by maga
thx for the answers, i will think about it on next songs ;)

Re: My first good one

Posted: Wed May 30, 2018 1:33 am
by brandystarbrite
maga wrote:
Sat May 26, 2018 6:54 am
hope u enjoy it :D
https://soundcloud.com/user-270251718/rainy-day
It's a very nice, calm, tranquil tune. :)

Tip: The melody should be a tiny bit louder though.