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Hi,

here my new dance track:

https://soundcloud.com/davide-naldi-941871438/trance-10

maybe too long...but i'm trying new transitions effect ..melodic finale, Enjoy it and please..hear it loud!

appreciate any comments and suggestions,

Have a nice Sunday

Davide

Good job

This tune, sounds like two different tracks, that are put together.

But dude! This whole tune sounds totally wicked!!

From 0 to 4:35 secs is my fave part.
But the part from 4:35 secs onward, sounds totally cool too.
I like what you did, with the synth sounds in this one.
Great work.

Yop!

I really like the way the pressure is rising in the intro, and at 2:38, I was expecting something big, a heavy beat, or a killer keyboard riff, something that would make me jump on the dancefloor like a chimp on speed...I must admit that I was a bit disappointed (but maybe I did not listen to the track at the right volume, I will give it another chance tomorrow when I will be alone at home)

Well i didn't invest lot of time ti merge in a better way the two part of the song ...i admit.
Yes, Mo Stitchi, maybe after that crescendo feel a powerful lead Synth riff is the right thing to push the dance feeling... thanks for the suggestions.

dave30814 wrote: ↑

Sun May 27, 2018 8:19 pm

https://soundcloud.com/davide-naldi-941871438/trance-10

Indeed, no chimp on speed ("on" or "under"? How do you say?)
I did not expect the second part, sounds sweeter.

Yop!

D.Ipsum wrote: ↑

Sat Jun 02, 2018 10:48 am

Indeed, no chimp on speed ("on" or "under"? How do you say?)

If we refer to this song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfPQB-mtQDY of Nina "Unbeschreiblich" Hagen, on is the right word.

Mo Stitchi wrote: ↑

Sat Jun 02, 2018 1:12 pm

If we refer to this song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfPQB-mtQDY of Nina "Unbeschreiblich" Hagen, on is the right word.