Back with an updated project
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2018 11:32 pm
by ChiliWafer
Posted last week a very rough sketch/baseline of piece of mine. After some feedback I changed it a bit and it'd be great if I could receive more feedback.
https://soundcloud.com/user-284896241/song1-v2-wip
Re: Back with an updated project
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2018 2:20 am
by brandystarbrite
The piano intro is really nice.
I like the beat too.
Tip: From 2:00 secs, the piano melody sounds really nice.
But after a minute or so, that melody plays over and over repeatedly, til the end.
To make it sound less repetitive, I suggest making a few more piano melody variations.
Then, you could go back to the main piano melody, later on in the track.
But so far, it's sounding good though.
Re: Back with an updated project
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2018 4:27 am
by ChiliWafer
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑Sun Jun 17, 2018 2:20 am
The piano intro is really nice.
I like the beat too.
Tip: From
2:00 secs, the piano melody sounds really nice.
But after a minute or so, that melody plays over and over repeatedly, til the end.
To make it sound less repetitive, I suggest making a few more piano melody variations.
Then, you could go back to the main piano melody, later on in the track.
But so far, it's sounding good though.
Thanks for the advice. I'll definitely add stuff and spice it up later on
Re: Back with an updated project
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2018 7:11 pm
by D.Ipsum
I agree with Brandy, it lacks some additional variations. This can be a variation of the piano line, or the introduction of a new instrument, e.g. a wrapping pad to break the repetition.
I think this track does not need lyrics, it works well like that.