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What do you guys think of this? It's my first track, not the first i made but the first made by me i published on SC

https://soundcloud.com/user-953804990/up-to-the-sky

This is cool. I like the way it builds.

It is quite unique, I like how the "chorus" sounds.
The bass, that shift at beginning is..... Something, it's personal preferences though.
How it's build up is simply good, like you do really go up and fly, then dropped instantly to the ground, causing the earthquake.

Thanks, guys!

For the bass, Gregorian, other user on Discord told me that portamento was a bit high, and this make it strange at the beginning but i like it as it is.

Wooah! Now this is an amazing tune.
The way that part from 1:35 secs sounded, was unexpected and sounded really cool.
Fantastic use of synth sounds for this tune.

Roxas wrote: ↑

Thu Jun 21, 2018 2:48 pm

https://soundcloud.com/user-953804990/up-to-the-sky

Nice. It hits hard, especially the bass
Some drums don't hit so hard, maybe an eq can help, or layering, or Idk.

Thanks a lot! I'm a bit confused because a discord user told me that drums were too loud, so... I think i will maintain drums like they are, instead, i have to correct some issues with tonality at the intro of the song, where the bass portamento create a strange effect.

But maybe in the end I will leave it as it is