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Here's my new song. A bit experimental in places . I hope the drums sound ok. I'm also a bit unsure of one of the samples . Any feedback welcome
Listen to Blink Of An Eye by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/blink-of-an-eye

Hi Dewke,

Lot of good ideas in this tune, but I don't see the link between them. Your other tracks often had a clear structure, at least something I could understand, but this one doesn't (maybe I'm a bit tired....)

I like the unusual bongo jungle, kinda style of this one.
And the entire thing sounds, like a mish mash of many good ideas.
A small volume raise, would be nice for this tune.

"I'm also a bit unsure of one of the samples"
Okay. Which sample are you not sure of?

Thanks Brandy and Mo . I do agree that the song is a mish mash of ideas. It started off much more experimental, but the song doesn't really go anywhere . Was worried about the ooh sample. Not sure if it's quite in tune or if it fits

Dewke wrote: ↑

Fri Jun 22, 2018 7:41 am

Here's my new song. A bit experimental in places . I hope the drums sound ok. I'm also a bit unsure of one of the samples . Any feedback welcome
Listen to Blink Of An Eye by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/blink-of-an-eye

Nice tune, a little less dense than your previous ones, there are more breaths in this one.

Thanks D.Ipsum . I tried to put a few more breaks in this one

I agree that a little direction is lacking but I appreciate the experimental nature of it. Nice going.