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I did some subtle touch ups in the mean time. New and improved; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Whz-o5 ... sp=sharingbrandystarbrite wrote: ↑Mon Jun 25, 2018 2:02 amOkay. After listening to it, I find it to be a good tune. A bit repetitive, but still, a good tune.
but I feel as if it's missing something."
Yeah. I agree with that.
Even I have no idea, what could be added to this tune. This one is a toughy.
If I get an idea, I'll post back here again.
Hey there ryvius! so these are the only thing I can tell:the black ryvius wrote: ↑Mon Jun 25, 2018 6:05 am
I did some subtle touch ups in the mean time. New and improved; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Whz-o5 ... sp=sharing
A guy is supposed to rap over it, so that's why there's repetition.
- That bass is actually a piano that I just had playing some low notes. Duly noted, I'll turn it down.Khron0 wrote: ↑Tue Jun 26, 2018 2:23 pmHey there ryvius! so these are the only thing I can tell:the black ryvius wrote: ↑Mon Jun 25, 2018 6:05 am
I did some subtle touch ups in the mean time. New and improved; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Whz-o5 ... sp=sharing
A guy is supposed to rap over it, so that's why there's repetition.
- I didn't really like the bass, growly, buzzy bass around 0:13 onwards. Its a bit too loud in my opinion.
- You could add a bit of filler sounds in the background likes some more pads maybe a bit of white noise.
- Some minimal plucky arp towards the end.
- Maybe a kick just to get some more groove. Not the 4 beat pattern but a 1/8 beat.
Thats all that I would recommend for the track. Its simple yet has some vibe to it. The voice(don't know what to call it) at 0:30 is great addition to the song and I like it. The atmosphere at the beginning is neat as well.
Would love to here this with the vocals.