H4CKTON3 vs art.winndelen() - Twitter (EDM)

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Two days ago i was checking the lmms forum, and when i went there, i found in the music project section a guy that has made an EP called "Social Media". It didn't seem so interesting, and i was expected to see another principiant and his music.
Not this time. It was, as i said, a newbie, but he has created some really cool melodies, the only thing he really missed was mixing and mastering.
One of these melodies in particular, of a track called Twitter, caught my attention, because it was really good. So i contacted him, asking at the beginning if i could do mastering of his track. But while i was doing mastering, i become to put my touch on the track, to see how good it could have become.

This vs is the result, I hope you like it!
https://soundcloud.com/h4ckton3/h4ckton ... en-twitter

Check out art.winndelen() here: https://soundcloud.com/art_winndelen
And his original track here: https://soundcloud.com/art_winndelen/twitter
Concerning the EP of art.winndelen, here is the link on the forum If anyone has any advice to give him.:
https://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5 ... 591#p57591
H4CKTON3 wrote:
Sun Sep 23, 2018 2:35 pm
This vs is the result, I hope you like it!
https://soundcloud.com/h4ckton3/h4ckton ... en-twitter

Check out art.winndelen() here: https://soundcloud.com/art_winndelen
And his original track here: https://soundcloud.com/art_winndelen/twitter
Good job.

I would add a little volume to kick and clap.
Thanks!

I dunno, i think drums fits well, but are opinions
H4CKTON3 wrote:
Tue Sep 25, 2018 4:38 pm
Thanks!

I dunno, i think drums fits well, but are opinions
Yes, it's just my appreciation, nothing objective ;)
H4CKTON3 wrote:
Sun Sep 23, 2018 2:35 pm
This vs is the result, I hope you like it!
https://soundcloud.com/h4ckton3/h4ckton ... en-twitter
Oh ho ho! This music sounds amazing! And I like the melodies in this.
This is some really nice work guys. :D
As for the mastering, you did good work with that.

Okay. Now I'll check out the original track. :)
Thanks a lot guy!