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Hey all! It's been a long minute since I've been on here or made a song, for that matter. However, I got some time recently and turned out something new. Any and all criticism welcome as always. I will return feedback on your projects too! It may take a couple days as I work during the week but I will get to it, promise!

Here's the link:
YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3bXvTbxZmQ
SC: https://soundcloud.com/strawbeary-jams/grip-of-terra

Thank you all <3

StrawbearyJams wrote: ↑

Wed Oct 03, 2018 12:53 am

Here's the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3bXvTbxZmQ

Hi! It's been a long time!

Sorry, I can not play the video for a html5 reason ... it often happens on Youtube, I think the pc I use to go on the internet is too old ...

(you do not you use SC anymore?)

(Thanks for your feedback on 0094_02-3 - Honey, I hope to publish a new version soon)

Sorry about that, didn't realize I had forgotten SC link =P

https://soundcloud.com/strawbeary-jams/grip-of-terra

StrawbearyJams wrote: ↑

Thu Oct 04, 2018 2:34 am

Sorry about that, didn't realize I had forgotten SC link =P

https://soundcloud.com/strawbeary-jams/grip-of-terra

Nice one. There are good effects on the voice. However, in my cheap headphones, the voice does not find its place among the other instruments. Maybe the voice is missing a bit of volume. But I do not think it's just a matter of volume. Idk.

The Strawbeary is baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack!!
Nice to see you back.

This track sounds really good.

Tip: It needs a bit more volume balancing, between the instruments and the vocals.
Because the instruments and sounds, seem to drown out the vocals a bit, in certain parts of the track.

But overall, this whole thing sounds really good dude. Super nice work.