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Posted: **Mon Oct 22, 2018 9:22 pm**

Hello guys, I am a part of NOS TVRE IN TENEBRIS, my producer name is Szens and me and my friend ZOZO made a new emo trap beat, could you guys give it a listen and give us some feedback?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZwonUiWKk-k

Thank you

Posted: **Tue Oct 23, 2018 8:18 pm**

Hi Szens.
Hearing this was kind of relaxing.
I only say "kind of" because for me, the bass and kick seem too loud in comparison with the rest.
Everything else seems good.

Good job

Posted: **Tue Oct 23, 2018 8:29 pm**

Hey,

I like the vibe and the melody, there is only one thing I would add, and that is a snare on the start of every third bar, which is staple in trap. But maybe I'm just to used to that in trap music that it just automatically doesnt sound right when it is lacking.
But otherwise, nice, relaxing tune!

Cheers,

Porte/V.B.

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/portebeats

Posted: **Wed Oct 24, 2018 6:22 pm**

Canilho wrote: ↑
Tue Oct 23, 2018 8:18 pm
Hi Szens.
Hearing this was kind of relaxing.
I only say "kind of" because for me, the bass and kick seem too loud in comparison with the rest.
Everything else seems good.

Good job

Jo man thank you for taking the time to listen to our beat. Ye maybe the 808s and kick were a little bit too loud but we wanted to make it stand out a little bit, but maybe it was too much haha, we will put the volume of those down in our next song

Thank you again for taking the time to listen to the beat and to give us feedback

Posted: **Wed Oct 24, 2018 6:28 pm**

flaggy148 wrote: ↑
Tue Oct 23, 2018 8:29 pm
Hey,

I like the vibe and the melody, there is only one thing I would add, and that is a snare on the start of every third bar, which is staple in trap. But maybe I'm just to used to that in trap music that it just automatically doesnt sound right when it is lacking.
But otherwise, nice, relaxing tune!

Cheers,

Porte/V.B.

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/portebeats

Oh wauw haha we really had to add that, would give it some more punch. Thank you man, this helped a lot

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