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Posted: **October 30th, 2018, 10:34 pm**

Hi,

New track .... hmmm actually not. I found it on the shelve and thought of sharing it with you to have your thoughts.

https://soundcloud.com/hamza_k-1/snow-flake/s-DgaI5

Yours

Posted: **October 31st, 2018, 1:43 am**

I took a sneak peak at your profile.

You have some nice songs that shows a litle bit of your music perspective. I enjoyed to listen some of them, specially one mostly in piano.

About this one, in my opinion the song transmits a good mood, it's kind of dreamy and even inspirational.

About the melody itself, in general seems kind of flat, in a sense that doesn't change a lot of the feeling from start to end.
It has a small transiction like the ones at 0:47 and another at 1:15 but it's not very distinct from the main melody, which takes part of the beauty of it.

Don't be afraid to change things a litle bit more, or even introduce different melodies, instruments or effects.
Almost 1 month ago I've made a song that could be maybe in the same spectrum as yours called "Music Box", which is a good example to show exactly what I've said about changing the melody, without losing the main feeling.

Keep producing

Posted: **November 1st, 2018, 10:52 am**

Canilho wrote: ↑
October 31st, 2018, 1:43 am
I took a sneak peak at your profile.
You have some nice songs that shows a litle bit of your music perspective. I enjoyed to listen some of them, specially one mostly in piano.

About this one, in my opinion the song transmits a good mood, it's kind of dreamy and even inspirational.

About the melody itself, in general seems kind of flat, in a sense that doesn't change a lot of the feeling from start to end.
It has a small transiction like the ones at 0:47 and another at 1:15 but it's not very distinct from the main melody, which takes part of the beauty of it.

Don't be afraid to change things a litle bit more, or even introduce different melodies, instruments or effects.
Almost 1 month ago I've made a song that could be maybe in the same spectrum as yours called "Music Box", which is a good example to show exactly what I've said about changing the melody, without losing the main feeling.

Keep producing

I Agree with, it is missing many key elements and needs work on beat and Melody.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts Canilho

Posted: **November 3rd, 2018, 3:48 am**

This music is lovely!
The melody is so lovely, it's stuck in my head now.

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