what you think?

[Rafaelcortazio]

I learned a lot about music theory, but at the time of practice I have a hard time making good music. Five years ago I played at FL Studio and stayed all day trying to make a good song and without success, I did this little chord progression song what do you think?

https://soundcloud.com/skymastersound/my-garden

[brandystarbrite]

I learned a lot about music theory, but at the time of practice I have a hard time making good music. Five years ago I played at FL Studio and stayed all day trying to make a good song and without success, I did this little chord progression song what do you think?

https://soundcloud.com/skymastersound/my-garden

Hey! This sounds really wonderful!

[Rafaelcortazio]

thank you brandy!

[musikbear]

Five years ago I played at FL Studio and stayed all day trying to make a good song and without success

All day! wooo..
Look masterpieces does not roll out in a day for most. Ok it does for EltonJ of PaulMcC, but other great songs takes months -Even years
You have chosen the Production forum, and production vice i feel your song needs a solo instrument.
I would dampen the piano-chords ever so slightly, and then run some piano tune over it, and thats not hard to do at all, because you know your music-theory, so you just need to overlay, your lovely chord-progression, with a vivid piano-note sequence in scale and key

[Rafaelcortazio]

thanks for the feedback and thanks for the tips musikbear