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Hi,
I've just finished my 2 first tekno tracks with LMMS.
Let me know

https://soundcloud.com/user-219620699/tracks

Best regards,

shadow dancer wrote: ↑

December 25th, 2018, 8:03 pm

Hi,
I've just finished my 2 first tekno tracks with LMMS.
Let me know

https://soundcloud.com/user-219620699/tracks

Best regards,

First BB - This one sounds nice.
But for some strange reason, I think that it's missing something, that'll make the tune, sound
a bit more complete. Note: I have no idea what that extra something, could be.
However, everything that you have in this track, the beat, instruments, synth melodies, and
sounds, sounds good so far.

2nd BB - This one has a cool beat too. And it sounds a bit more complete, that the first one.
One thing that I noticed, is that this has, some nice synth melody variations, put into it.
Really nice work dude.

Thank you so much for your feed back.
It makes me happy !!!
I'm working on a third track, so... see you soon.

shadow dancer wrote: ↑

December 27th, 2018, 8:14 pm

Thank you so much for your feed back.
It makes me happy !!!
I'm working on a third track, so... see you soon.

Allright!

The feeling of creating our first song and realease it to the world is something impossible to forget.

About First BB, It's amazing that this is your first track. The song is very interesting.
I love the soft sounds you've used, they are very pleasant to the ears and make the whole song very enjoyable.

The Second BB for me has a different connotation. Instead of relax state of your first song, this one is more like the typical song for late nights at the club, where the DJ has to fill the times with neverending / repetitive rythms.
Very addictive rythm, good bass line, but in my opinion the excessive repetition puts this one on a lower level than your first one...

Keep making good stuff.