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My first song with LMMS
Posted: February 23rd, 2019, 4:13 pm
by amicusomnibus
Hello!
I've been using LMMS for a few months now and I decided I want to start making EDM with it. This is far from that, but I think it's good for a start.
Feedback would be appreciated. Thank you all.
https://youtu.be/wXeV4cc8UFA
Re: My first song with LMMS
Posted: February 23rd, 2019, 8:09 pm
by northivanastan
This is good for a first song. I like the instrumentation, and I notice you using a number of features I didn't know about when making my first song.
My main criticism is that it doesn't stand out very well compared to other EDM music, and the drums could be more impactful.
Anyway, welcome to the forum and I hope you continue to enjoy making music.
Re: My first song with LMMS
Posted: February 25th, 2019, 3:14 am
by brandystarbrite
amicusomnibus wrote: ↑February 23rd, 2019, 4:13 pm
Hello!
I've been using LMMS for a few months now and I decided I want to start making EDM with it. This is far from that, but I think it's good for a start.
Feedback would be appreciated. Thank you all.
https://youtu.be/wXeV4cc8UFA
This sounds superb. And the melodies are really lovely.
Tips: This tune needs a good bit, of volume balancing.
Because, some of the sounds and melodies in this track, need to stand out a bit more,
and sound a bit more stronger, because they sound too soft, and a bit dulled down in some places.
Re: My first song with LMMS
Posted: February 25th, 2019, 5:35 pm
by Rakso
Great for a first song! Some individual drums are occasionally a bit harsh (like right before the drop at about 1:52). Also the drop lacks power (the lead could be more powerful). But a nice and uplifting tune and quite a clean mix

Re: My first song with LMMS
Posted: March 24th, 2019, 11:36 am
by amicusomnibus
Thank you all for the feedback! I know it's been like a month or so but I've been busy.
I did listen to the advice. I'm posting a new song now which sounds a bit better in my opinion but I can always work on my music to make it better.

Re: My first song with LMMS
Posted: March 26th, 2019, 6:34 am
by Luca3715
Nice for a first song. Music is very good...
Awsome....
Re: My first song with LMMS
Posted: March 30th, 2019, 3:32 am
by brandystarbrite
amicusomnibus wrote: ↑March 24th, 2019, 11:36 am
I'm posting a new song now which sounds a bit better in my opinion but I can always work on my music to make it better.
That's good. Working hard to improve your music, is very nice.