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My two songs i made on LMMS - Critic welcome

Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2019 9:58 pm
by spite77
My new project "Tom Lesky", it's a Synth Pop Retro Wave project that I want to bring a little bit forward next to my regular punk band. It should help me to learn the structure of songs and the theory of music.

On some Monday mornings you just have to work but it's like there's absolute chaos around you and the media reports about it as if everything is normal and everything goes its regular way.

Monday Morning
https://soundcloud.com/tomlesky/mondaymorning

Mission Bronx
https://soundcloud.com/tomlesky/missionbronx

Re: My two songs i made on LMMS - Critic welcome

Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2019 2:54 pm
by Incorruptable
Very creative, i like second one more so than first.

The use of vocals over sections of music can sometimes not work, i think these do.

Re: My two songs i made on LMMS - Critic welcome

Posted: Mon Jun 24, 2019 4:14 pm
by Reiodust
Hi spite77,

both of them are very pleasant to listen. 80s tracks are so cool! I found the second one very catchy. I have a very slight preference for this one.

RD

Re: My two songs i made on LMMS - Critic welcome

Posted: Sun Jul 07, 2019 9:26 am
by spite77
Thanks a lot for your feedback, I learn a bit more with every new song and it's fun. I am happy that you like my songs.

Re: My two songs i made on LMMS - Critic welcome

Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2019 4:34 am
by brandystarbrite
spite77 wrote:
Sun Jun 23, 2019 9:58 pm
My new project "Tom Lesky", it's a Synth Pop Retro Wave project that I want to bring a little bit forward next to my regular punk band. It should help me to learn the structure of songs and the theory of music.

On some Monday mornings you just have to work but it's like there's absolute chaos around you and the media reports about it as if everything is normal and everything goes its regular way.

Monday Morning
https://soundcloud.com/tomlesky/mondaymorning

Mission Bronx
https://soundcloud.com/tomlesky/missionbronx
Monday Morning - This has an interesting style and sound to it. Like literally.
And together with the news audio clip, it helps tell a story.

Tip:
Maybe in some parts of the track, you can add an echo effect, to the news audio clip.

Or if you want, you can even add lmms calf reverb to it. If you do, I suggest playing around with the wet amount and dry amount dials. Probably, even the decay time dial.
But a word of advice: If you use calf reverb, try not to turn up the decay time dial up too much, otherwise, it'll resonate too much in your tune. :P

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Mission Bronx - I like how this track starts off, with those synth melodies.
The whole tune, has a nice 80's synthy style to it. This is some really good work dude.