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The first track I made using LMMS

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2020 8:26 pm
by Rip
Hello everyone!
I am a new member on this forum, and would like to share with you the very first track I made using LMMS on a Linux computer.
I am very satisfied with how it turned out, although there are a few more things that I don't really like - especially the kick.
Mixing could use some more work, but for now I am more than happy!
Here is the link, and I hope you'll like it! :)

https://soundcloud.com/user-721769899/s ... iginal-mix

Re: The first track I made using LMMS

Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2020 8:32 pm
by invain
Very good man! I like the atmosphere, sounds... :)
The closed hihat is sounding somehow dry and sticking out, I would do some fx and lowering of the volume. Considering the simple chord progression (two chords dominating) during entire song, could be shorter slightly also. Try doing some chorus/prechorus, bridges etc. in the melodies and songwriting.
Maybe sounds like I am criticising, in fact is just subjective constructive comments :) I'm monitoring on my Edifier headphones which are no pro gear.
Keep up the good work.

Re: The first track I made using LMMS

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2020 4:23 am
by brandystarbrite
Rip wrote:
Fri Feb 21, 2020 8:26 pm
Hello everyone!
I am a new member on this forum, and would like to share with you the very first track I made using LMMS on a Linux computer.
I am very satisfied with how it turned out, although there are a few more things that I don't really like - especially the kick.
Mixing could use some more work, but for now I am more than happy!
Here is the link, and I hope you'll like it! :)

https://soundcloud.com/user-721769899/s ... iginal-mix
This is a lovely 80's sounding track.