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Hey fellow producers

just uploaded this one: enjoy and comment

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/comply-2

Hi man,

The mix is very good, all elements in place.
The melody...very odd and disharmonic, obviously some of the notes are out of tonality. I am confused about the song emotion, sounds like some wierd psyhodelic music.
Snare drum seem to have a lot of white nose and hissing, maybe is high-passed too much with hp filter.
For EDM you need much stronger kicks in general.

Take in consideration that this critics are from a beginner in music production.

Peace

It sounds not bad, but I think you need to read up on scales as invain suggested.

Here is one vid about the topic.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WhkwmABRtp4

Rolivhuwa wrote: ↑

March 2nd, 2020, 3:08 pm

Hey fellow producers

just uploaded this one: enjoy and comment

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/comply-2

Ehyo ! (:

it's like several songs in one, you know. Maybe focus on one melody to make a shorter, punchier sound. But personally, I like the mix. Afterwards, it's maybe a bit too "messy", mixed up, for most people.. But it's a good sound. Everyone has their own tastes. But it's still a bit "bland" I think for a name like "electro dance"... Keep enjoying yourself ! PEACE !
chaussures hip-hop

Rolivhuwa wrote: ↑

March 2nd, 2020, 3:08 pm

Hey fellow producers

just uploaded this one: enjoy and comment

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/comply-2

I agree. This sounds like a nice mix, of many different tunes, with varying pitches. It's very nice.

This sounds like one of those tunes, where a musician just wants to express his/her musical creativity, in an entire track, without caring about tone or pitch etc. We have a few musicians here, who do that sometimes. And I will admit, it's a good way to come up with lots of tunes.

Updated:

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/comply-2