Nah man, people post WIPs in here all the time. There's no shame in it! And honestly it was kinda neat being able to hear both versions. I listened to the update first, and it was cool to go back and see where it started from. I dig the track, it's got a nice energy to it and a really cool melody, I love how everything sounds together. It can drag on a little in some spots... personally I thought the lead melody could have come in a lot sooner. Other than that it's a pretty solid track. A little minimalist maybe, but I think that works in your favor here. I could see this being in a soundtrack for a futuristic point and click adventure game.