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My First Lo-Fi Song with Lyrics.

Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2020 10:41 am
by Xstarhero
https://soundcloud.com/xstarhero/summertime-sadness

I submitted this track for Best of LMMS Vol 7.
PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK.

Re: My First Lo-Fi Song with Lyrics.

Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2020 4:15 am
by brandystarbrite
Xstarhero wrote:
Sat Apr 04, 2020 10:41 am
https://soundcloud.com/xstarhero/summertime-sadness

I submitted this track for Best of LMMS Vol 7.
PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK.
Tip:
Okay. Your singing is nice and it goes well with this tune, and I like the accent too. But, in some parts of the tune, I think you might need to improve your singing a tiny bit. But overall, your singing is not bad at all. :)

Overall, the tune is really nice, not bad at all.
If you want, sing it over and re submit it, for Best of Lmms Vol 7. ;)

Re: My First Lo-Fi Song with Lyrics.

Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2020 7:55 pm
by Xstarhero
brandystarbrite wrote:
Sun Apr 05, 2020 4:15 am
Xstarhero wrote:
Sat Apr 04, 2020 10:41 am
https://soundcloud.com/xstarhero/summertime-sadness

I submitted this track for Best of LMMS Vol 7.
PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK.
Tip:
Okay. Your singing is nice and it goes well with this tune, and I like the accent too. But, in some parts of the tune, I think you might need to improve your singing a tiny bit. But overall, your singing is not bad at all. :)

Overall, the tune is really nice, not bad at all.
If you want, sing it over and re submit it, for Best of Lmms Vol 7. ;)
thank you will take your advice my g