My First Lo-Fi Song with Lyrics.

[Xstarhero]

https://soundcloud.com/xstarhero/summertime-sadness

I submitted this track for Best of LMMS Vol 7.
PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK.

[brandystarbrite]

https://soundcloud.com/xstarhero/summertime-sadness

I submitted this track for Best of LMMS Vol 7.
PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK.

Tip:
Okay. Your singing is nice and it goes well with this tune, and I like the accent too. But, in some parts of the tune, I think you might need to improve your singing a tiny bit. But overall, your singing is not bad at all.

Overall, the tune is really nice, not bad at all.
If you want, sing it over and re submit it, for Best of Lmms Vol 7.

[Xstarhero]

https://soundcloud.com/xstarhero/summertime-sadness

I submitted this track for Best of LMMS Vol 7.
PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK.

Tip:
Okay. Your singing is nice and it goes well with this tune, and I like the accent too. But, in some parts of the tune, I think you might need to improve your singing a tiny bit. But overall, your singing is not bad at all.

Overall, the tune is really nice, not bad at all.
If you want, sing it over and re submit it, for Best of Lmms Vol 7.

thank you will take your advice my g