My first song.
Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2020 6:07 am
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Re: My first song.
Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2020 9:56 am
A little more variation might help. To be honest though, it's pretty good for your first song. It's certainly more melodic than my first track was.
Re: My first song.
Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2020 3:24 am
Not bad at all.D-Mitry wrote: ↑Tue Apr 14, 2020 6:07 amAny suggestions for how I can improve?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pEEs3RAjORc
This tune and the melodies in it, sound really nice. And I like the pleasant style of it too.
I agree, that a few more melodies/melody variations, would do good for this tune.
But overall, you did a very good job with it. Nice.
Re: My first song.
Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2020 3:40 am
Thank you very much! its not really my "first" song. But its my first song posted on the forum. I agree, a little more variation would help it sound more alive.FilthyWizard wrote: ↑Thu Apr 16, 2020 9:56 amA little more variation might help. To be honest though, it's pretty good for your first song. It's certainly more melodic than my first track was.
