My second track - "Fleeing at night" - Feedbacks?

[IanCaio]

Hey everyone!

I posted the second track I managed to finish on LMMS, it's also on the Synthwave genre. Tried to apply some things I learned since the first one, like using some sound effects and drum "turnovers" for transitions, improving track equalization, layering. I thought of using side chain at the beginning, but I wasn't sure it would fit well, since the drums were very audible even with the pads playing.

For the composition I tried to play with the Phrygian mode to get a more suspenseful feeling, not sure I achieved it.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated, I'm trying to find things to improve at each song!

Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/user-95117366/fleeing-at-night

[brandystarbrite]

Hey everyone!

I posted the second track I managed to finish on LMMS, it's also on the Synthwave genre. Tried to apply some things I learned since the first one, like using some sound effects and drum "turnovers" for transitions, improving track equalization, layering. I thought of using side chain at the beginning, but I wasn't sure it would fit well, since the drums were very audible even with the pads playing.

For the composition I tried to play with the Phrygian mode to get a more suspenseful feeling, not sure I achieved it.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated, I'm trying to find things to improve at each song!

Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/user-95117366/fleeing-at-night

The track seems to be missing dude.
Re-upload it whenever you have time.