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Hey producers

You can find one of my latest song named deep message here:

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhun ... ep-message

Rolivhuwa wrote: ↑

Sat May 09, 2020 10:26 pm

Hey producers

You can find one of my latest song named deep message here:

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhun ... ep-message

This tune definitely sounds good.
One thing I can say, is that your music is starting to get better and better, with each track.

The piano part, that comes in at 1:35 and ends sat 2:07 seconds, sounds really good. I think that part should loop over again, because the piano's time in that part of the track, seems too short. The same advice I suggest, when the piano comes in later in the track.

Advice: I think the low pitch horn sound, heard from 8 seconds, comes in a bit too soon. Let the intro play for about 4 bars, then bring in the horn sound.