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10th song made with LMMS, seeking improvement

Posted: Sun May 24, 2020 7:37 am
by Iuyt235
Hi there, this is my 10th song with LMMS and I'm seeking advice for improvement

My own major critique for this song is that it lacks some good transitions and the chords are maybe a bit boring. lol

Other than those, I want to ask:
1. Is there some major mixing issues? ex. too muddy/too empty/stereo problem
2. I think my snare is just somehow not clean enough? Is it EQ or the sound choice issue?

Thank you very much for any feedback!

https://soundcloud.com/user-948146881/10a

Re: 10th song made with LMMS, seeking improvement

Posted: Sun May 24, 2020 12:10 pm
by Gps
I can't say I really like the track but that is about taste.

I think it sounds fine, so mixing wise I think its good.

Re: 10th song made with LMMS, seeking improvement

Posted: Sun May 24, 2020 6:22 pm
by Iuyt235
Gps wrote:
Sun May 24, 2020 12:10 pm
I can't say I really like the track but that is about taste.

I think it sounds fine, so mixing wise I think its good.
Thank you!

Re: 10th song made with LMMS, seeking improvement

Posted: Tue May 26, 2020 7:45 pm
by FilthyWizard
Nice laid-back track.

The mixing sounds fine to me too.

Re: 10th song made with LMMS, seeking improvement

Posted: Wed May 27, 2020 8:21 pm
by Iuyt235
FilthyWizard wrote:
Tue May 26, 2020 7:45 pm
Nice laid-back track.

The mixing sounds fine to me too.
Thanks!

Re: 10th song made with LMMS, seeking improvement

Posted: Wed May 27, 2020 8:55 pm
by Dalton
good effort i think no need to improve in mixing