LMMS Fantastic EDM, Deep House, Progressive House

[Rolivhuwa]

Hey producers, attached is a track that I think shows my improvement: what do you think?
Comments are really welcome

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/workload-1

[KGub]

I like it, but it might be hard clipping at some points (?). The build-ups and risers are nice but they terminate unexpectedly with no resolution. Sometimes it's good to bring the tensity of a build-up/riser back down quickly without just terminating it. Very chill and nice temp IMO.

When you are done mastering your track, move everything forward to give a bit of breath, otherwise SC just plays immediately.

Of course these are just opinions and not meant to be any sort of negative criticism. The track is pretty good IMO.

Edit: I just reviewed your channel and it's impressive, I especially like Recession with a nice tribal swing. Very well done!

[Rolivhuwa]

Hi

Thank you for your advice, much appreciated.