Beta song, cyberpunk style

[Belzebru]

Hello, i have tried to do something new, this is a sperimental track for a big project that i have i mind but i think i have a lot of stuff to fix, if you wanna give me hints on this track you are welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/user-968242476/destroyed-world

[SpinEternal]

Hi, I'm new to this forum ! If I had to change something on this song, its the drums need to be louder and the vocals to be put somewhere in the depth with some effects or something !
Also this song has that stoner metal groove ! Its cool, it reminds me of "Monster Magnet - Spacelord" !

[Clark Johannes]

Hi, I'm new to this forum ! If I had to change something on this song, its the drums need to be louder and the vocals to be put somewhere in the depth with some effects or something !
Also this song has that stoner metal groove ! Its cool, it reminds me of "Monster Magnet - Spacelord" !

Yep, I agree with that. The drums needs to be louder and the vocals needs some glitchy electronic effects. Some background stereo synths need to be added too. also, the E guitar is perfect tbh