I don't care for the original that was the inspiration for your song... so yours is better to my ears.
Friendly feedback: I don't know if it's because it was being played "live" from LMMS or if the processed file would sound the same, but there were a few audible clip-like sounds coming from the kicker (one at the beginning of measure 68 was kind of noticeable.) After going back for a second and third listen, I'm hearing some "tapping" sounds in the piano intro... Is that intentional? I can't see another track that would be producing that sound. It's like someone is tapping along with the notes, but it only occurs in measures 3 and 7, maybe with the high notes.
I loved the beat from 53-56 and the sweet drop! Overall, it was really enjoyable and well balanced.
It's so neat seeing the project in the video. I'm not a very proficient user of LMMS, yet... so I get inspired by seeing recent projects.