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Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2021 1:26 pm
by newsguy
Oh well, it's not like I'm on the run or something... 😆

https://epages.wordpress.com/2021/06/17 ... %9F%8E%A7/

I don't consider this my best work *by a long shot* but rather an exercise in transitioning to LMMS..! I will probably remix it again before making some kinda YouTube video. So constructive comments welcome.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2021 3:44 pm
by Gps
I think it already sounds very good.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2021 9:38 pm
by newsguy
Thanks. In my bedroom, the guitar sounds okay. Downstairs thru computer speakers with a small sub, it sounds a bit too distant, so... either fix the volume curves or take some reverb off it... not sure yet 🙂

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2021 5:36 am
by brandystarbrite
The tune sounds really nice.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2021 7:02 am
by curiouskitty
Oh, it definitely has a groovy 70's vibe! So... are you going for 70's "action" cops show, or 70's "drama" cops show? I would suggest maybe speeding the tempo up just a little bit, unless you are definitely aiming for drama. It just feels ever so slightly sluggish.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2021 7:40 am
by kuxoxare
very nice ;)

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2021 1:59 pm
by newsguy
brandystarbrite wrote:
Sat Jun 26, 2021 5:36 am
The tune sounds really nice.
Thanks.
curiouskitty wrote: Oh, it definitely has a groovy 70's vibe! So... are you going for 70's "action" cops show, or 70's "drama" cops show? I would suggest maybe speeding the tempo up just a little bit, unless you are definitely aiming for drama. It just feels ever so slightly sluggish.
Yeah, you're probably right. I'm getting on in years... your clock slows down with age. Someday I might dig up the original version I did with FLStudio and ReFX Nexus demos. It sounded much 'bigger' but I was just beginning so didn't really know about mastering, etc.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 10:03 pm
by Rafaelcortazio
newsguy wrote:
Sat Jun 19, 2021 1:26 pm
Oh well, it's not like I'm on the run or something... 😆

https://epages.wordpress.com/2021/06/17 ... %9F%8E%A7/

I don't consider this my best work *by a long shot* but rather an exercise in transitioning to LMMS..! I will probably remix it again before making some kinda YouTube video. So constructive comments welcome.
Thats pretty good !

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2021 5:28 am
by brandystarbrite
A remix of it? Not a bad idea at all. :)