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Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: June 19th, 2021, 1:26 pm
by newsguy
Oh well, it's not like I'm on the run or something... 😆

https://epages.wordpress.com/2021/06/17 ... %9F%8E%A7/

I don't consider this my best work *by a long shot* but rather an exercise in transitioning to LMMS..! I will probably remix it again before making some kinda YouTube video. So constructive comments welcome.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: June 19th, 2021, 3:44 pm
by Gps
I think it already sounds very good.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: June 19th, 2021, 9:38 pm
by newsguy
Thanks. In my bedroom, the guitar sounds okay. Downstairs thru computer speakers with a small sub, it sounds a bit too distant, so... either fix the volume curves or take some reverb off it... not sure yet 🙂

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: June 26th, 2021, 5:36 am
by brandystarbrite
The tune sounds really nice.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: June 28th, 2021, 7:02 am
by curiouskitty
Oh, it definitely has a groovy 70's vibe! So... are you going for 70's "action" cops show, or 70's "drama" cops show? I would suggest maybe speeding the tempo up just a little bit, unless you are definitely aiming for drama. It just feels ever so slightly sluggish.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: June 28th, 2021, 7:40 am
by kuxoxare
very nice ;)

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: June 28th, 2021, 1:59 pm
by newsguy
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑
June 26th, 2021, 5:36 am
The tune sounds really nice.
Thanks.
curiouskitty wrote: Oh, it definitely has a groovy 70's vibe! So... are you going for 70's "action" cops show, or 70's "drama" cops show? I would suggest maybe speeding the tempo up just a little bit, unless you are definitely aiming for drama. It just feels ever so slightly sluggish.
Yeah, you're probably right. I'm getting on in years... your clock slows down with age. Someday I might dig up the original version I did with FLStudio and ReFX Nexus demos. It sounded much 'bigger' but I was just beginning so didn't really know about mastering, etc.

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: July 1st, 2021, 10:03 pm
by Rafaelcortazio
newsguy wrote: ↑
June 19th, 2021, 1:26 pm
Oh well, it's not like I'm on the run or something... 😆

https://epages.wordpress.com/2021/06/17 ... %9F%8E%A7/

I don't consider this my best work *by a long shot* but rather an exercise in transitioning to LMMS..! I will probably remix it again before making some kinda YouTube video. So constructive comments welcome.
Thats pretty good !

Re: Blowing my cover by posting this!

Posted: July 10th, 2021, 5:28 am
by brandystarbrite
A remix of it? Not a bad idea at all. :)