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So, I'm still posting here hoping to surprise you a bit. I don't even know the exact genre, just electronic music ; I'm just following my mind's flow and whims. Please don't hesitate to throw feedback at me.



here it is >>> https://audiomack.com/newtoon-1/song/80ies-greatness

>>> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7QEVfbQJK54

newtoon wrote: ↑

Thu Jul 15, 2021 1:23 pm

So, I'm still posting here hoping to surprise you a bit. I don't even know the exact genre, just electronic music ; I'm just following my mind's flow and whims. Please don't hesitate to throw feedback at me.

Oy! There are definitely alot of nice melodies in this.

Advice: There are some parts in the tune, like for example from 2:25 to 2:27, where it changes to another part of the track abruptly, making it sound like different tracks are put together. Try to find a way, to make the transitions, flow from one part to another part more smoothly.

brandystarbrite wrote: ↑

Wed Aug 04, 2021 4:05 am

Advice: There are some parts in the tune, like for example from 2:25 to 2:27, where it changes to another part of the track abruptly, making it sound like different tracks are put together. Try to find a way, to make the transitions, flow from one part to another part more smoothly.

First of all, thanks for the feedback and compliment on melodies !

Oh, there is a moment where I "glued" via audacity two bits of tracks here and it 's not smooth at all, but not where you mention it, which is funny (did this because I 'm lacking cpu and found this way of doing a longer track).

Now, I must admit that I try to invent new stuff along the way and it's not always with a plan in mind, so it "jumps" a bit. What I would like to know if possible is what bit people prefer. I would then perhaps keep only that and try to develop around it, or understand what people like most in the sounds I develop and make another one similar in a future track.

thanks again !