paxtonleiny wrote: ↑Fri Jun 09, 2023 2:12 am
Both of these renditions are really intriguing to my ears. In a minute and a half song, you've got a lot to say. I feel like the song's vibe would be better organised if it were three or four minutes long. Also, the really high-pitched one-shots are far too noisy. It's grating on the ears a little bit.
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Thanks and I agree 100 % with old that. For the fun part, the main small tune is something I drafted in my head a long time ago, far before I came to make music !
So, I try to make it like a dance tune, testing different forms but I think the last one, more 90s kinda is the one I had in mind.
The second part of the song is actually a tryout of making only percussions and it's not too bad for a first try, I think. I then linked the two but, yeah, it's still a bit odd and too short. I make a lot of shot tunes just to experiment ; once I'm satisfied or bored with it, I try something else and forget to make an actual song if I have no clue what else to do with it.
Thanks again for the comment !