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I have just added a new trance track to my yT channel
inTranceNr2
Listen to full version and watch the video for the track here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bTT1GTUcQPc

Any comment and or critique most welcome.

Lets start negative, I don't like the vid.

I Love however most parts of this song.

Around 7.04 min, I hear some sound cut out ? Prob a you tube issue.

Around 1.07 I would like to hear the high pings ? a bit more. ( but that might related to my headset ? )

Really like the track and love the parts like around 4min, the break ? And then the build up, when it ends its too soon for me, I would not mind the last part to continue some more. Nice fade out though.

I think this could be a hit, although it might not be commercial enough, as in not repetitive enough, but I like it, and I am impressed.

Thank you! -Too bad about the vid - i did fiddle quite long with that :p

Gps wrote:Lets start negative, I don't like the vid.

I Love however most parts of this song.

Around 7.04 min, I hear some sound cut out ? Prob a you tube issue.

Around 1.07 I would like to hear the high pings ? a bit more. ( but that might related to my headset ? )

Really like the track and love the parts like around 4min, the break ? And then the build up, when it ends its too soon for me, I would not mind the last part to continue some more. Nice fade out though.

I think this could be a hit, although it might not be commercial enough, as in not repetitive enough, but I like it, and I am impressed.

It sounded great too me. I was watching the frame counter, while listening to it. No cutting out at anytime. I had only 19 frames dropped, out of a little over 11000.
Nice work.

Wooah!
Cool track dude!!
This is really good!
You really made a hit here dude!
This is really really good!!
This reminds of Trance music before 2010. (When it sounded good.) Lol!
Very spacey sounding too.

My only complaints:
The start up needs a tiney bit of re work though.
During the start of the music track. I hear a pinky ponky sounding synth in the background that sounds a bit too soft.

Build up the drum rolls a bit earlier, and a bit longer, so that it blends in with the rapid firing drum rolls, before the main song takes off.

All in all, a super great song musikbearz.

Your other tracks are cool, but this is the best one I've heard from you.

Also, the pulse music waves video is neat.
It looks like alot of work went into it.

But a suggestion:
For music this epic , A space planet type scene pic, would do a music track like this, well!
Something like these:

http://www.highreshdwallpapers.com/wp-c ... robe-9.jpg

http://hdwallnpics.com/wp-content/galle ... 281%29.jpg

http://pre14.deviantart.net/d48f/th/pre ... 5hux3k.jpg

The 1st two pics, especially the 2nd pic, with the blue saturn ringed planet are my favs!

PS: Now if only that Saturn planet were moving.

Thanks Brandy, i will look on the intro. I just like how the plinkyplonk low parts first is obscured and then comes out of the white noise, but i will look at it once more, since both you and Gus both think its too subtle :)

really dig the sound of this, the video is trippy af

Thanks!

Nice job. I especially like the ambient part around the 5:00 mark. It transitions well into the next section.

Thanks Lloyd. These transitions are often a problem for me, so that is nice the hear :)