Second song I made in LMMS & Ardour

[MCJosiah]

So I made the beat for the song completely in LMMS & recorded the vocals & mixed & mastered the song in Ardour 5. The song is called "Escape Back Home" & it's a basic story telling song. I used one Kicker for the kick & samples for the rest of the drums. The chord progression & arp are both Zyn-Add-Sub from the built in plugin in LMMS. Then the bass is a simple Soundfount. It took me about 3 days to complete. Tell me what you guys think I should improve on:

https://youtu.be/ggesV7lkVbg

[brandystarbrite]

So I made the beat for the song completely in LMMS & recorded the vocals & mixed & mastered the song in Ardour 5. The song is called "Escape Back Home" & it's a basic story telling song. I used one Kicker for the kick & samples for the rest of the drums. The chord progression & arp are both Zyn-Add-Sub from the built in plugin in LMMS. Then the bass is a simple Soundfount. It took me about 3 days to complete. Tell me what you guys think I should improve on:

Awesome rap tune dude! This tune got serious rapper style!