Oh, Pretty Woman
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2022 11:44 am
by beauroge
Re: Oh, Pretty Woman
Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2022 1:50 am
by brandystarbrite
Bravo beauroge. Nice work.
Re: Oh, Pretty Woman
Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 11:44 am
by Mampfwurm
It's a lot of fun! Glad I'm not the only one that loves the sound of cheesy old midi soundfonts. Apologies if that's not what you used or intended. A few nitpicks: The calliope synth melody thing is nice, but it really overshadows everything else, especially in it's higher registers. Maybe it could be a bit quieter or use some equalization. Also the second build-up at 1:50 is really exciting at first, but when the melody afterwards sounds just like it did before, it's a bit dissapointing. Maybe you could have increased the intensity by adding something new. And the end is a bit abrupt. I get that was probably kind of the point, but in my mind it feels like there is some final note or something missing, like a big cymbal or a final staccato chord.
But these are nitpicks and probably pretty subjective in some parts and I really enjoyed it nonetheless. The harmonic work in there is also really fun.