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Feedback help needed
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2015 4:20 pm
by Gps
Hi guys
Need feedback badly. I love / like some parts, but other parts hmm I don't know?
First wanted to call this topic what 's wrong?
If it helps I can share the lmms file, but I did use three vst....
https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/sadtrumpet
Re: Feedback help needed
Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2015 12:03 am
by brandystarbrite
Nice.
Sounds a bit like a unique variation, of old school House music to me.
It sounds very Hippy skippy.
That trumpet is cool!
The trumpet can't be sad because, I like how the trumpet ends the music track.

Re: Feedback help needed
Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2015 1:31 pm
by Gps
LOL, and thank you.
It seems its not as bad as I thought. I am not entirely happy yet about some sounds I used.
Would like a more fatter bass sound for example.
Re: Feedback help needed
Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2015 10:38 pm
by brandystarbrite
I am not entirely happy yet about some sounds I used.
Really? I wonder which ones.
Would like a more fatter bass sound for example.
Interesting.
Perhaps, make a version with a "fatter bass," and we'll see where that goes.
I'll look out for it.

Re: Feedback help needed
Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2015 10:09 am
by musikbear
The thrumpet Reminds me a lot of that sexy track with the girl-marching-band.. cant rem. its name.. ..galaporo.. buha.. something.. ..else
But your track
Maybe a tad long, and perhaps a real 'crescendo' with a sharp steep into silence, or something like that.. im not sure, though :p
Re: Feedback help needed
Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2015 8:58 pm
by Gps
Thank you
Sharp steep into silence sounds good.
Maybe I have to listen to some trance tracks with a crescendo, to find out whats wrong with mine.
I hope I am understanding this right though, but thinking about trance I think I do.
Or deep purple - child in time

( although that's not a steep one)
A tad long yes I think I agree, been looking at deleting one part ( out of 4) and having a better build up.
This one btw ?
http://www.boreme.com/posting.php?id=26561
Re: Feedback help needed
Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 1:59 pm
by musikbear
Or deep purple - child in time
o. m. g.
Y e s
It is s o goooood
.. i remembered the track now
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LgFJJ77w2nA
Re: Feedback help needed
Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 9:39 pm
by Gps
Deep purple, john Lord, musical wise one of my heroes.
And lol about that track, the trumpet does sound somewhat like mine.
DVS Saxaphone. free vst
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpTqCU18vaA