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My first song

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:09 am
by LMMSNewcomer
I literally thought up the melody in my mind and plopped it into LMMS and I got a pretty cool beat. Here's a video of it.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4nzaEKNXyvk

Re: My first song

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 12:06 pm
by musikbear
Welcome to the community!

You did fine here. you have a well produced track, with no clipping, and fine use of instruments and percussion. The genre is not me, though :)

Re: My first song

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:14 pm
by Alx
Hi there! Welcome here!

Although it's not really my genre I think it's pretty cool! I don't know if it's supposed to be like that, but the synths are pretty quite compared to the drums. But that might be just my opinion! Overall, cool stuff, you should keep getting better or something!

Re: My first song

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2015 8:43 pm
by LMMSNewcomer
Thanks for the welcomes everybody! And thanks for the feedback. Appreciated very much. Glad to hear you both like it. Will look into the synths being a bit silent compared to the other instruments, though to me it sounds just fine

Re: My first song

Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2015 5:08 pm
by brandystarbrite
Interesting music.
Nice track. :D

But I noticed that the synth sounds sound very low. Too low as a matter of fact.
And the drums drown it out. So you can barely hear the synth sounds.
Alx is right.

My suggestion, is to raise the volume of the synth sounds or make it louder.
And if possible, put some reverb effect, on that synth sound. ;)

Interesting type of music by the way.
Might sound good for a mega man type game. :D

Re: My first song

Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 2:43 am
by Grey Sun
Very good first track.

Re: My first song

Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2015 6:07 am
by LMMSNewcomer
New version is out now; It fixes some clipping the original had, changed some instruments to others, and then added a bit more to it. Enjoy :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sEBy5rjZ-9E