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Posted: **Sat Sep 23, 2023 11:33 am**

Cyberpunk Orchestral Song.

https://soundcloud.com/samuel-tariku/n ... l_sharing

Project has been sitting in my "todo" folder for too long and i thought i should finish it.

Feedback is appreciated.

Especially at the strings part. Kept messing with with, yet it won't sound perfect to me.

Posted: **Mon Sep 25, 2023 9:30 am**

I especially like the part from : 2:07 and especially the use of this small added melody in the background (behind the sharp one). Then, my mind was expecting a crescendo using this and putting more emphasis on the melody in the background (and more drums etc.) but what came was average and then it stopped and my mind was a bit frustrated (it is a good sign !

) .

Otherwise, I went to listen to your tunes and I find the crescendo of "Starfighter " from 1:27 very cool ! The tune could get another rythm and emphasis at the very end if you want to develop it one day.

Posted: **Tue Sep 26, 2023 4:09 am**

The synth melody heard from the start is really cool. Overall nice track bro. I will admit, I think you could do a bit more with this track.

Posted: **Wed Sep 27, 2023 12:14 pm**

newtoon wrote: ↑
Mon Sep 25, 2023 9:30 am
I especially like the part from : 2:07 and especially the use of this small added melody in the background (behind the sharp one). Then, my mind was expecting a crescendo using this and putting more emphasis on the melody in the background (and more drums etc.) but what came was average and then it stopped and my mind was a bit frustrated (it is a good sign ! ) .

Otherwise, I went to listen to your tunes and I find the crescendo of "Starfighter " from 1:27 very cool ! The tune could get another rythm and emphasis at the very end if you want to develop it one day.

Thanks so much for feedback. Yeah i felt like i needed to add something at the end too. Kept trying lots of variations till i got frustrated and just let it go. The Starfighter crescendo was sort of an happy accident lol.

Posted: **Wed Sep 27, 2023 12:25 pm**

brandystarbrite wrote: ↑
Tue Sep 26, 2023 4:09 am
The synth melody heard from the start is really cool. Overall nice track bro. I will admit, I think you could do a bit more with this track.

Thanks for the feedback.

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