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Neon - Cyberpunk Orchestral
Posted: September 23rd, 2023, 11:33 am
by SamuelTariku
Cyberpunk Orchestral Song.
https://soundcloud.com/samuel-tariku/n ... l_sharing
Project has been sitting in my "todo" folder for too long and i thought i should finish it.
Feedback is appreciated.
Especially at the strings part. Kept messing with with, yet it won't sound perfect to me.
Re: Neon - Cyberpunk Orchestral
Posted: September 25th, 2023, 9:30 am
by newtoon
I especially like the part from : 2:07 and especially the use of this small added melody in the background (behind the sharp one). Then, my mind was expecting a crescendo using this and putting more emphasis on the melody in the background (and more drums etc.) but what came was average and then it stopped and my mind was a bit frustrated (it is a good sign !
) .
Otherwise, I went to listen to your tunes and I find the crescendo of "Starfighter " from 1:27 very cool ! The tune could get another rythm and emphasis at the very end if you want to develop it one day.
Re: Neon - Cyberpunk Orchestral
Posted: September 26th, 2023, 4:09 am
by brandystarbrite
The synth melody heard from the start is really cool. Overall nice track bro. I will admit, I think you could do a bit more with this track.
Re: Neon - Cyberpunk Orchestral
Posted: September 27th, 2023, 12:14 pm
by SamuelTariku
newtoon wrote: ↑September 25th, 2023, 9:30 am
I especially like the part from : 2:07 and especially the use of this small added melody in the background (behind the sharp one). Then, my mind was expecting a crescendo using this and putting more emphasis on the melody in the background (and more drums etc.) but what came was average and then it stopped and my mind was a bit frustrated (it is a good sign !
) .
Otherwise, I went to listen to your tunes and I find the crescendo of "Starfighter " from 1:27 very cool ! The tune could get another rythm and emphasis at the very end if you want to develop it one day.
Thanks so much for feedback. Yeah i felt like i needed to add something at the end too. Kept trying lots of variations till i got frustrated and just let it go. The Starfighter crescendo was sort of an happy accident lol.
Re: Neon - Cyberpunk Orchestral
Posted: September 27th, 2023, 12:25 pm
by SamuelTariku
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑September 26th, 2023, 4:09 am
The synth melody heard from the start is really cool. Overall nice track bro. I will admit, I think you could do a bit more with this track.
Thanks for the feedback.