Some feedback much appreciated.

[Jbarn]

Hey guys, been making a good amount of beats and messing around with new sounds.
If you could please check out this little sneakpeak I made, and let me know what you think. Much appreciated.
I would like to turn it into a full track but I need some support and motivation haha.
So let me know what you think, critique me however you want.

https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/sneakpeak

[brandystarbrite]

I just listened to it. Luv how it sounds.
And the beat and music, are exceptionally cool.